Writing About “Place” – The Power of Geography and Metaphor

For those of you considering writing an essay for this year’s Essays on Childhood: A Sense of Place, I wanted to share an excellent example of how only a few words in a literal place description can have a powerful double impact as both metaphorical and literal reality.

Silas House is the author of the novel Eli the Good and a co-author of Something’s Rising: Appalachians Fighting Mountaintop Removal.  He is, as they say in elite circles, the schizzle.  Consider what the man does in these few words from this February 19, 2011, piece in the New York Times,  My Polluted Kentucky Home – NYTimes.com:

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As a child I once stood on a cedar-pocked ridge with my father, looking down on a strip mine near the place that had been our family cemetery. My great-aunt’s grave had been “accidentally” buried under about 50 feet of unwanted topsoil and low-grade coal; “overburden,” the industry calls it. My father took a long, deep breath. I feel that I’ve been holding it ever since.

In the NYT piece, House is writing about the toll that coal mining takes on not only the land, but the people who are so intricately and intimately a part of that land.  We don’t know anything about his great-aunt, his father, or even exactly what he is seeing.  But the layers of pain are palpable in the image of a family grave literally buried in waste from an industry that dismisses such action as collateral damage.

In this image, and these few words, we understand quickly that his great-aunt, this woman who was a member of his family, is being lost a second time to her loved ones.  The cost of this grief is a ripple effect of a tightened chest in the next generation below her, and now in the author as the third generation.  All are suffocating and suffering from the legacy of certain mining practices on sacred family ground.

As you consider your essay, think about things you have seen in the landscape, house, fairground, school, play yard, or other place that had a strong influence on your childhood.  Do you have a particular scene or memory of a physical reality that might serve to inspire your writing about your childhood?  How do the emotions that rise when you “see” this place serve to generate adjectives, verbs, and nouns that may flow from your pencil and eventually  become an outline of your story?

Image credit:  Elizabeth Gaucher, small grave sites at the corner of Bridge and Loudon Heights Roads in Charleston, West Virginia.

2 thoughts on “Writing About “Place” – The Power of Geography and Metaphor

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